Mixed emotions
Going thru my mind
Scattered about
what else Can I say
My heart feels STILL
Yet sill breathing..?
Everthing seems so gloomy
DISAPPOINTING black and white
So I created
A world to
Disapear in...
Where NEVER found
But.NOW.that's currupted
TOO.!
Hey Girlie,
ReplyDeleteI haven't been reading your stuff lately. For some reason I am not alerted to you new entries. This makes me sad because I missed some great opportunities to get on here and help you grow. Not that you need too much help. I love your writing so much. You have gotten so good at "writing the white space" that your poems now speak to me even in the places where you pause. You have some very powerful line breaks in these poems, which you then highlight by using caps! I love it. You have style and strong mood. With a little word choice and spell check, you could submit these into contests if you wanted. You are very good.