What do you write when you need a poem. It is a concept that we all like to have such as being in charge. Or shall I say control but is it really worth having control? The question is proposed we as humans lessen the value of control cause one is not the controller of even it's own life. Who got the remotekentrol of of your lite when umconciously we let others voice or oppinion our thoughts is this control or in your best interest
I guess I was exspecting more I guess I can't see that a crazy so all that he can!!!!!
I think you have some good concepts here, but I have a hard time following your line of thought. Can you read this aloud to yourself and then restructure it. I think you will have a piece that will really make people think about what they do and do not control in their lives.
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